One more thing. With J201 instead of 2N5457 there may be a problem with setting right bias voltage (because of the parameters difference between the two models). If you have 24V coming into the circuit then 20k trimmer is probably too low in value to get 12V on a drain of the thansistors. That's why you can set only 16 to 18V. Replace 20k with 50k or 100k. Or get the 5457's