With INTENSITY all the way down and VOICE all the way up, you should get a pretty bright glow out of D2. Did you read
this article? There's not much that can cause
both LEDs to be off except installing them backwards. If you have a DVM, then set the controls per the first sentence in this post and measure the voltage at each pin of Q2. Should read something like this:
E: 4.4V (pin closest to C15)
B: 5.0V (middle pin)
C: 7.4V (pin closest to RATE pot)