I saw that you were using the audio jacks with protruding barrels -- have you made a full size board like this with those kinds of jacks?
One problem that I've had is that with the jacks protruding from the top, it's really hard to get the pedal into the enclosure because
you can't get the pots and the jacks on top to line up at the same time. I guess I saw that you were planning on setting the jacks in the enclosure and then soldering it in place - I suppose the entombs the pedal in place at that point but maybe that's ok. Or maybe it works ok with the long-legged pots since they have some more wiggle room?
I did find the Neutrik NMJ6HCD2 that has the externally-screwed in nut, which is 18.2mm wide instead of 20mm wide like most of the others - that allows a little breathing room but maybe not enough to do top-mounted like that in a 1590B, which looks only 44mm wide at the top between the screw holes.
I don't know if your DC jack footprint is right - the cheap one from Tayda (
https://www.taydaelectronics.com/dc-power-jack-2-1mm-barrel-type-pcb-mount.html) has the 'switch' connector turned 90 degrees so it's actually quite a lot narrower.
I ... think your input/output are okay here, assuming that the pots are mounted on the back of this. This'll put your input on the right hand side of the pedal once you flip it over. (Your left and right are reversed since you're actually looking at the 'back' of the circuit board when considering the direction of the pedal when it's pots-side-up)